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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was great so far! Keep up the great work. Please update with a new chapter, please please please pretty please?
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
False, you say?
Well, things are about to get interesting I think.
Well, things are about to get interesting I think.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great story by a great erson the exitement is killing me as for the basball have the the preds go all out gangster,keep up the good work dude=)
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are not playing nice with the other children Firefly. I want to know if Storme's clan will get captured by David or see him as he is. He needs to die anyway. MORE!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGGGGG dude u had better write more this week or else ....i no where you live haha. and i got a class with you.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, why authors love cliffies. I suppose it is the pot calling the kettle black isn't it. Keep going need to see the creature and what else Storme and Centu'de get up to.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE NOW! or ill get you in photography. muhahaha ...seriously write more
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What the heck does the evil Doctor have? I think he has Aliens. Okay and that annoying song brings back memories for me I have five older brothers and that was al I had to use against them. Well that and my parents I was the baby and the only girl. Yeah I have POWER!!!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is very very good. keep writing I can't wait to see what happens.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How annoying is that . I can TELL you!! Good chapter now onward