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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U BETTER WRITE MORE! .....or ill get u in photography class. muhahahaha
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL It is songs like that that made me want to beat my sister!!! Great stuff
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice annoying song.LOL What does he have in that darken room and what does he want with the Yautjas and I hate David's assistant.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that song LOL. I hope David dies, bring the next chapter
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
most kick ass lol its kool u need 2 finish chap 5 and then a chap 6 and so on man.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I am here to help in any way I can and if bugging the heck out of you makes you write great chapters then expect me to do it again when you fall behind.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well bugging me makes me feel that my story is liked as well if u all have ideas i will be happy to hear them ^_^
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good I hope ther is more of it soon. There are some misspelled words but nobody's perfect. Keep going
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see you are posting again, and I hope you continue with this I think it is pretty good... Kraven.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good so far please, continue