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Excellent work, I was wondering if you'd be interested on working with me on a fanfiction idea, keep up the excellent work!

I would like to note that story is posted twice in chapter 16. And regardless if you will continue it or not, the story itself is ūery interesting.

I loved it!
One of the best fics I have ever read.
Thank you.
~ Loki

It always made me really sad to think of all of those years Obi-Wan spent alone in the desert watching over Luke from afar after the clone wars. He really is a solid hero and a lovely man. I like how in your story he has escaped the life of a Jedi. He has deep disappointment about being sent to the agicorps, but maybe he will see that in the long run he is lucky not to be sucked completely into the Jedi’s dogma about love and attachment. I think your Anakin is spot on. He is impulsive, emotional, and affectionate, a perfect match to Obi-Wan’s calm reserved nature. I will eagerly be awaiting an update to this awesome story-Thanks for a great read.

Usually when a story isn't updated in a while, I'll have forgotten the previous story line, and usually decide not to read the update out of laziness. However, I remember liking this story so much, that I read the entirety of it to refresh and then the update. I'm glad I did!

I really like where this is going, your pacing on the charecter development is awesome. It seems to be avoiding falling into all the same cliches and such you usually see in "what if" stories. keep up the good work and dont feel pressed into ecpplorng every single what-if. I like the subjects youare working.

much fear indeed

I love this story. Really, truly, I do, and it makes me happy when you update!

Great story! I can't wait to read more :)

I love this story!!! Your writing is so fun to read, and you portray the characters so well! I hope you get a chance to update soon, this is wonderful!!