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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Well I already reviewed this on Fanfiction, but may as well do it here too! I so enjoy how this story is going! The tension is an interesting twist and all I can say is Obi-Wan will definitely have his hands full! *snicker* That man needs to be shook up every now and then.
Though Anakin will have his hands full too. I loved this line: This man who seemed separated from the world around him. Anakin wondered what went on beyond his shields. Good luck finding out, Anakin...you're so going to need it. I'm getting the impression that though Obi-Wan is still compassionate and caring, he has completely withdrawn from the world...or at least the companionship part of it. It is almost like his isolation during New Hope. Well he needs and deserves some happiness and I think Anakin is just the one to make him see that.
Though good luck getting that written. Those boys can be such a handful! *sighs and shakes head*
Update soon!
Though Anakin will have his hands full too. I loved this line: This man who seemed separated from the world around him. Anakin wondered what went on beyond his shields. Good luck finding out, Anakin...you're so going to need it. I'm getting the impression that though Obi-Wan is still compassionate and caring, he has completely withdrawn from the world...or at least the companionship part of it. It is almost like his isolation during New Hope. Well he needs and deserves some happiness and I think Anakin is just the one to make him see that.
Though good luck getting that written. Those boys can be such a handful! *sighs and shakes head*
Update soon!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! Obi-Wan the Almost Jedi! And poor sweet clueless(pouty, whiny, sulky) Anakin! Now I'm kinda hoping the hooded figure with the long braid is my favorite Senator, who may or may not be a senator in this universe. A little manage-a-trois might be fun here... as long as it's good and angsty... but whatever!
Love your characterizations as usual!
Anon
Love your characterizations as usual!
Anon
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank You THaNK you for updating! I've been dying to know what will happen next and thx for responding to me...anyhow, another wonderful chapter! They are so good the wait is worth it, keep up the good work, Lee~
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like slash, but this is very good. You've given real thought to your characterizations. They are realistic and sympathetic. I feel SO sorry for the salve boy. His motivations are right on. Keep up the excellent work! I'm anxious to read more! :-)
Just call me Anon. ;D
Just call me Anon. ;D
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how long a chapters take, so please excuse me if I'm being a bit selfish, but when are you going to update?? I've been waiting for a while...I love this story and I'll (along with many other readers) appreciate it if you can update! Thx Lee
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's great! I love the way Ani's so confused. And Obi-Wan's interesting.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's a very interesting AU.
I hope you're going to continue with this.
I hope you're going to continue with this.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more!!!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! :)
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease, please update soon. Your writing skill is fantastic and I simply can't get enough of this story. I love the plot too! Please keep up the great work and I will be anxiously waiting for more!