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for Sun Kissed

by Vee017

person Nagash
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a fine story and only one reviewer? Time to change it. ;-) Now you have two. ;-> Well written, and although this idea was done many times, I still enjoyed it - thanks to you.
Continue, will you?
person k
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter...though obiwan was certainly suprised, hmm? cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon!
~K
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really great !
Obi-wan is such a prude guy *giggles*
And poor Anankin, this sucks more than the original one...
Will Obi-wan be the submissive in this story ? (I hope soooo X3)

Can't wait to see the next chapter ! Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
person reb Riddle
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It has Angst whitch i like but you can still see the Happyness to come! ( at least I hope ) I love it!!
person judgewac
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this. I like it and want to know what will happen next. Poor Obi-Wan and confused Anakin. It was cute and made me smile despite the situation and what Anakin is suppose to be. I am interested in seeing how it will play out and how they will move beyond the whole slave thing.
person diane
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really been enjoying this. Love the slow buildup and confusion that Obi-Wan is facing. I could see that, since Obi-Wan was never chosen to be a Padawan, there wouldn't be any way that Anakin would be discovered in time for TPM. What happened to Qui-Gon, I wonder?
I can't wait to see how the Agri-corps is going to react to Obi having a slave and a pleasure slave at that. Good job so far. Looking forward to more.
person Adair
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far. Wonderful writing and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
person kiara
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is good. its gonna be interesting to find how they get to know eachother. its a great story--keep updating!
person k
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. it could be good. can u update? i'll eagerly await the next chapter!