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Ugh...please update???!!! You're killin me

What a sweet ending to the chapter, we can only hope more Jack/Lizzie goodness will be next!

Next chapter is bound to be a good'un.

I've loving this! Love the way you are writing Jack - so true to form, so funny and hot. Awaiting your next update eagerly! I need at least a little bit of closure!

Another great chapter! Update soon!

Well-done! Aw, that was sad. *sniff* Okay, I'm over it now. On to more J/E! Liked Barbossa's lines, btw.

I'm not a W/E shipper by any means, but this chapter was so sad! You did a very good job writing it, I could feel both Will & Elizabeth's pain and saddness (and tears) at saying goodbye.

I'm sad that this will end soon, although I know it must eventually. Keep writing more stories, you're so very talented!

good job with chapter 9. i loved how you played the story between elizabeth and will. everyone knows that while in his head he's probably thinking "i'm going to gallantly go slaughter jack, and sweep elizabeth up in my arms and run off with her!", he would never really do that. he's too nice a guy, which is good, a pirate story always needs one or two. ^_^ so now, finally, elizabeth is free (very nice way to end the chapter, by the way), free to go be with jack. i'm excited to read the next chapter and see what wicked things you come up with for our two lit'ul lovebirds!

keep up the good work.

~*kitty*~

:bawls: oh my god...i feel so bad for will!

oh man poor will...wonderfully written, though. i think you've got his character nailed.