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for WobblyLegged RumSwilling Pirates

by srkier

person Karma
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just got to tell ya... I am in love with this story! Update soon.
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first of all, i must give you cookie-props for being so ridiculously quick with your writing. secondly, i like how you said in the beginning, we don't care HOW our darling jack is rescued, sufficed that he IS rescued; screw you, disney peoples. :P and thirdly, ah-pssh! don't gimme that "i'm not a good smut writer" crap; you're mother-truckin' awesome and it's 5:47 AM and i'm too hot'n'bothered to try and go to sleep for two hours before i have to wake up. yyyooouuu suck. in a good way, though. looking foward to reading more!! by the way, just a reminder... UPDATE SOON! please let liz tell will what she needs to tell him so's she can gets back to ole jack...!! oh yeah, you're a theatre major? you rock my socks even more than before. you rock my socks, off my feet and down the hallway.

much love and writer's wishes,

~*kitty*~
person Shad
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up since the last three chapters or so. I really like it. It's sexy with a little touch of innocence; like Elizabeth's perspective and thoughts. Looking forward to the rest.
person Christina
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now!!! Quickly!!!!! Update!!!!!! AGH!!!! PLease?
person sina
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn this is really good....plz mail when ya update
sina@fergie.at
person enia
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arhg! Why are they always interrupted when things start to heat up? Can't take the suspense, lock them in a brig and let the games begin and most important - COME to satisfactory conclusion (hehe)!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*begs* uuuupppppppdddddaaaaaaaattttttteeeeeee!!!! :P please?
person jessica
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update! update! UPDATE! must know what happens! needs more smutty j/e action.

I love this story!!!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!! This is incredible writing and an incredible story. My heart aches for Will, though, but I can see where Elizabeth is coming from. You write a delicious Jack and I can clearly see and hear Johnny as I read. Carry on. ^_~
person Firework
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, Fantastic.
It twist, turns and teases the whole way. Even up to the point where I had forgotten about Will too!
Now that is a distraction and a half! Though I don't know if I should feel sorry for him or not, as you write Jack and Elizabeth so well together.
I think I may have to start rooting for Jack to get the girl, I'm hooked!
*Pulls out pirate cheerleading costume*
I can't wait for the next update.

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