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for WobblyLegged RumSwilling Pirates

by srkier

person Anon
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to go into fic withdrawl. hahahaha, please update soon!! :)
person Stixie
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fan-bloody-tastic! Keep it up!
person jojos1
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! great chap! great story!!!
but you be a complete rotter, what a place to leave it! I dont know who will be more frustrated J and E or me by that knock on the door, it certainly got a howl of protest out of me, for someone who says they can't write smutt you were doing a great job!
waiting none to patiantly for updates, update soon please, put me out of my misery or I will send you videos of roach sex for the rest of your life!!!!! only kidding, I think.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! I like! Update soon! You can't leave us there!! :D
person Farah
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please forgive me.. but I was roflmao when I read your notes... roaches of all things? Eww... but hey... onto the main subject, that was an amazing chapter. I love how realistic you write the characters, soft smut or not.. it was hot!! And can we someone shoot the crewman who interrupted?!? Please?!? I hope you continue on!
person Mari
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love, love, love this story! So hot and soul-bearing.
person Aarika
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bugger is damn right! lol cant wait for the next chapter..and what about poor william? could elizabeth have a cousin or something lol that will could end up with...as much as i love jack/lizzie i end up feeling so bad for will.
person anon
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that sucks that you stopped there, but ew roaches *shudders*
person shatteredmind
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was sooo good. I loved the fact that they just went for one another, uncomplicated and very sexy! I even enjoyed the cliffie - Jack and Elizabeth's reactions to the interruption had me smiling.

As for your AN: Have seen plenty of those nasty little roaches in my time, since I live in a warm climate - thankfully not in this house though - keep a shoe handy in case you see another!
person Anguloce
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i feel your pain...after taking in a stray cat last fall my apartment was overrun by fleas, who then proceeded to jump ship over to my mom's house as well. suffice it to say she wanted to kill me. anyway...i'm really enjoying your story! can't wait for the next update!