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for WobblyLegged RumSwilling Pirates

by srkier

person ladyrei
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Point the first: *Squeeeeeeee!!* XD
(coherant) Point the Second: I think you enjoy teasing us a little too much... lol
Point the Third: That was amazing writing! I think you did a fantastic job!
Point the Fourth: DON'T LEAVE US THERE!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!
Point the Fifth: Poor crewman...I wonder if everyone could hear what was going on inside Jack's cabin... Poor Will...No, no I take that back. Screw Will... he's a pansy. ;P
Point the Final: UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!! XD
person Raven
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! MORE!!!! I love this, you are doing such an awesome job!
person megaera
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! No Stopping! More! Write More!
person Michelle
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe you left it there, although it is traditional... great writing, love the J/E action. Write more soon, I need closure! I'm pretty sure Will or someone is going to barge in though, before stuff gets too interesting... hehe! UPDATE!
person anon
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good yet again!!! Please write more soon!!!
person Firework
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! *Jumps up and down ranting and raving to herself*
You better have another chapter up by tomorrow or so help me god, I'm going to whine constantly until you do.
Evil cliffhanger!
*Headkeys*
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rawr, you big meanie! That was quite a cliff-hanger. I'll be looking for the next tomorrow then. When she decided to stay, I was thrilled. So good.
person Nicole
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story! Thanks! But where's the next chapter? The suspense is killing me!
person ladyrei
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...this is getting interesting indeed. I wonder how Jack will react to Lizzie's tears (wonder if Will can hear them too)...and I don't blame Jack for being angry. lol. I'm looking foward to reading more soon! Good job!!
person SexualJesus
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing, its fab! Love Jack/Elizabeth and this is great!
SexualJesus