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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Jack sounds like Jack, and lots of clever lines... sigh... I can't read or write enough about the aftermath of that kiss. I love the detail about her not being able to say his name... I can think of some naughty ways he could bring that about ;-) Keep on writing!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this one. You are good at letting us see it like you see it
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter, with another frustating ending! Please do continue1
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like! I like! keep going!! :D
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! You'd better own up to that promise. *wink*
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I totally love this story. You write Jack and Elizabeth very well and I love the coupling! I hope to see more soon! I can't wait!!!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! hahaha, wonderfully written (and I have a feeling we may be getting to the really good stuff soon!) Keep going!! :D
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love J/E! I'm hooked on this story already, I hope you continue writing. Good job!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the chapter fine except where you left it! Please do write more!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh now, it was great - all the intense looks were sexy - moving along fine. I'm looking forward to the next.