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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, the chapters are very short, which sucks, because the story is so good. ;) I'm really looking forward to more, and you are so very right about people (or at least me) not caring how Jack is saved, so long as I see him again. I'll be watching for more, and thanks for the story. -Jes
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, eliz/jack is my favorite pairing, I like the way you have them communicate, it seems realistic and something they would say.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!
You can't leave it there I'm gagging to see what happens next!
Oooh I'm so intrigued about it all!
I can hear confessions on the horizon...
You can't leave it there I'm gagging to see what happens next!
Oooh I'm so intrigued about it all!
I can hear confessions on the horizon...
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!!! Have them kiss already... you're driving me up the wall with the tension! LOL... another brilliant chapter... make them longer please?
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A bit of talking indeed! Well done and I like the title...I look forward to more!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the intensity! Please continue on...
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Very well written indeed! Please post more of this soon!! :) *bribes with cookies*
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well if reviews are food for your muse...i freely give food!
Great first two chapters. Great start. Great idea! You can feel the tension. Knife, slicing and all that jazz! can't wait for more!
Love, Ally
Great first two chapters. Great start. Great idea! You can feel the tension. Knife, slicing and all that jazz! can't wait for more!
Love, Ally
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray, another J/E fic her on AFF.net! Yes, DMC was great for the inspiration, wasn't it? I'm really enjoying this, fast-paced, well-written and I love Jack's way of toying with her. He dragged her to his cabin right away! My imagination is running wild now. :)
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue? I love it!