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for Just an Ordinary Evening

by nyxmidnight

schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! What a great little peak into their lives. You nailed their personalities and wonderful banter. Its so well written and the characters are so believable it should be a scene in the next movie!
person lightning fury strike
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*big grin* love it
i especially love the very last line and the opening line too
is wonderful it is
oh and you do their dialouge beautifully