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August 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal job hope to see this updated soon!
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well apparently you didn't try hard enough... LOL It's been much more than a year between updates. Is this story dead? Cuz it'd be nice to know if it is, it'll save us readers from pining after something that'll never come our way. So is it?
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no no no... you can't leave it there?!? *whineing* Please, please update soon. Please put me on your list for updates.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
when is chapter 11 coming?
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update now
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon begs u plz love this story
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon plz
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She is going through hell............I mean hell........what a frickin bastard. Even those who were supposed to be nice like humans are acting like animals. What jerks guys can be.........bastards.......anyway keep writing.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this story is by far the best I have come across. It is angsty, realistic, and flows very nicely. Sadly, it is not at its full potential due to the horrendous grammar . . . yes, the grammar is very appalling. But it certainly isn't the worst---there is worse, believe me!
How many betas do you have, anyway? I think it's time to either fire the ones you have (since the grammar is still lacking miserably), or just add some more who actually know what the hell they are doing. ^_~
Poor Tina, she has it bad, doesn't she? I am certainly looking forward to when Cro'vin's and Eal'cra's heads are sitting on a silver platter for her to admire. And I do hope she is the one who delivers the well deserved death blow. Hell, do away with Chris and Sonny while you are at it. I liked Sonny up until the point he raped her, too. He is no better than the bastard she calls 'my master.'
Please update soon as I am spinning circles in my seat over what will happen next. I am enthusiastically checking in on your wonderful story on a regular basis, so don't keep me waiting too long, okay? Thanks for a great read, and don't forget to brush up on that grammar!
¢¾ Shay Piratess
How many betas do you have, anyway? I think it's time to either fire the ones you have (since the grammar is still lacking miserably), or just add some more who actually know what the hell they are doing. ^_~
Poor Tina, she has it bad, doesn't she? I am certainly looking forward to when Cro'vin's and Eal'cra's heads are sitting on a silver platter for her to admire. And I do hope she is the one who delivers the well deserved death blow. Hell, do away with Chris and Sonny while you are at it. I liked Sonny up until the point he raped her, too. He is no better than the bastard she calls 'my master.'
Please update soon as I am spinning circles in my seat over what will happen next. I am enthusiastically checking in on your wonderful story on a regular basis, so don't keep me waiting too long, okay? Thanks for a great read, and don't forget to brush up on that grammar!
¢¾ Shay Piratess
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes , it was worth the wait, but now I'm horribly afraid for Tina!OMG she can't possibly go through this crap again!
Good job Shorty, don't keep us waiting too long ok?
Good job Shorty, don't keep us waiting too long ok?