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by JulieL

person chancelor22
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!! An update. That was awesome. Tina has a friend/ally - aww, how cute! But, he's sick - aww, how sad. I hope it's nothing too too bad. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work girlie!! =)
person AllSpark
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic, I'm glad that you decided to continue.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Shorty, just wow. I didn't think I would see So'ghan so "humbled" enough to request assistance for Tina. And I get why Re'san doesn't look too favorably upon the Grand Elder along with Ceta. And now at least she has someone there to help protect her...just wondering for how long. As both he and the Healer tell her, it's not likely to stop Cro'vin from being the evil bastard he is.

I'm just so very happy to see an update from you, and so proud, too! ^w^ Serious kudos to you, Shorty, and I hope you're able to update soon. Looking forward to more.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's a bit weird to me. I just thought this weekend of this Story and as I checked today for Updates I see that you have added a new chapter <_<. I didn't expect that 0o Good Fanfics are rare and I just love this one. I hope you will update sooner now.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There will be more chapters right?She will get to have some pleasurable Elder fun right?! PLEASE?!!!!Desperatly hoping you get inspired to do more. This was great!!!!!
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Please!!! UPDATE!!!! I really like this story so far. and I simply cant wait anymore for more of the story!!! Awesome story by the way!
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RAH!!!!!!!!!!
person Zellezra
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The third chapter was nice, very informative. Now, off I go to read the next, woosh!
person Zellezra
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, done with chapter four! I would have finished it SO much sooner, but I've been completely A.D.D. this whole night. Lol. I went from reading a few words to watching a movie, back to reading a few more words, going to YouTube, Pillaging from Limewire, yar. Reading a little more... Yeah, you get the picture. Hehe. Great chapter, by the way! ^_^
person Zellezra
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter two was intense. I honestly didn't expect the story to take such a turn (which is good; kept me on the edge of my seat, hehe), but it's very well done. Poor girl, I hope this other Yautja brings her some comfort. Well done! ^_^