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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Master must be punished!!!!!!!!!
I like the Grand Elder - he is kind.
Thanks for updating regularly.
I like the Grand Elder - he is kind.
Thanks for updating regularly.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a tough time reading this fic, because everybody is abusive to Tina, even the ones who don't condone what her "Master" does to her, with the exception of the healer. That the Yautja feel that humans are an inferior species is very clear here. It makes me wonder if her savior, even if he doesn't hurt her, will really be able to see her differently.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter. At first I thought the Elder wouldn’t be so touchy feely. But I was pleasantly surprised.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the offer to help :)
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are doing so well with this story.
But remember you promised an update for HOAW too. And also, I'm still here for betaing.
But remember you promised an update for HOAW too. And also, I'm still here for betaing.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please let this male help her and not hurt her.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this a good guy? I hope so
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you and your evil cliffies. lol.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do we see a ray of light coming into Tina's life to help her? I hope so please bring on the next chapter.