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for My Savior, My Elder, My .....

by JulieL

person AngelaH
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Her master has no respect for his Uncle., or his father. I really hope that he kills his son or beats him really badly!
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's awesome. Keep going.
person karmaxp
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would have called this chapter. Somebody kill me before I wake up becuase Damn here comes my Master. Save the girl
person Verbatim
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When will she be rescued and is she going to get a weapon somehow? You know to leave her mark. MAybe she can get the Healer to knco ker out again. Please hurry with the Elder
person scars lady 13
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you better get going on this one i'm hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are they handing out rewards differently now? It used to be money or a promotion or something. I have to borrow a line from SyJen and zegra here. Rewards my Ass and Please borrow zegra's knife for future chapters.
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry Elder and Rescue this woman and kill the Master with a hot poker and a gun. oh yeah and zegra's knife :) Next chapter
person circle of addictions
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I'll give you Ba'naj if you give me Sonny!
person SyJen
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rewards my ASS! She needs a gun, knife and one of those shoulder cannons right now. There has to be someone that does not think this is right besides the Healer.
person Parts
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even the human's are taking advantage of her, how low can she feel. I think you should take zegra's suggestion and borrow her knife cause she needs some help. I hate them all!