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for My Savior, My Elder, My .....

by JulieL

person karmaxp
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hate is a too gentle word to discribe what I would be feeling for my master. Let us see what is next death hopefully.?
person caz
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ASS KICKING! PAIN! LOTS OF PAIN!

god i hate those two.
person Firefly
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* that is evil poor tina T_T
person Kraven
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad she will be rescued and I hope her abuser is skewered on some wrist blades! Next chpater she is free right? Just kidding I know better than that it's in two chapters LOL....continue Kraven
person Edison
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will they make it in time before she dies! I hope she gets in a few punches the next time he tries to touch her. I hope the elder kills his son. BAd Blood
person Firefly
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this so all i have to say is : MORE CHAPTERS...*puppy dog eyes* please
person aquamum
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I like the Elder.
I hope that she is not hurt again though.
person karmaxp
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad someone is coming to rescue her. Not so long to update next time girlie thanks for the dedication
person Bluflame
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good she is going to be rescued; but who is going to stop those two from abusing her more.
person caz
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
three months... oooooooooog. poor girl, hope she cuts something off before the father gets there.

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