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by GylzGirl

schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really loved this story, it was fantastic! I love Jack and Elizabeth together, they were meant for each other! Too bad Disney didn't see it that way. But again I loved your story!
person Ninajj
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
weird story
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah brilliant! My favorite scene was the bathhouse, because he's such a bloody scoundrel, but the whole thing was touching and moving and utterly heartwrenching. My very favorite PotC fic I've read thus far. Even at their mushiest they still both felt in character. I've yet to see World's End, but you made me like Elizabeth again after the nonsense with the Kraken and her little hissy fit out on the beach. (And thank you, THANK YOU for making her lose that tan and the several references to her pale skin. She was the color of fake bake in Dead Man's Chest.) I just can't tell you how much this pleased me. If you haven't written more (which I'm about to go have a look at after this posts) I insist that you do, and if you have...well Hell you can never write too much yeh?

Also, extreme kudos to having a nicely well rounded story that comes to a conclusion. I'm terribly nefarious personally for leaving them hanging after a few chapters and wandering off in search of something new and exciting.

Loved it! Loved it!!

-Ray the Undeniably Wicked.
person Kakaro
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly love this story, very well written. Full of emotion and of course Captain Jack Sparrow. Don't turn him into a wuss tho. :D
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I simply don't know why I haven't found this story earlier! Damn it! Your story is one of the very best I've ever read! Full of emotions, very sweet and I simply love it :o)
The fact, that it has a happy ending made it on the top of my personal favourites list.
Please, I'm begging - write more like this. Actually, I've read this one three times since I found it and I'm sure there'll be more in the future.
And thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Take care,
~Saskia~
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
I've been waiting all those weeks for a new chapter, and now I've finished it.
I loved the story. It had the perfect combination of humor, romance and adventure.
I do hope you'll be writing another one, not necessarily a sequel, but another Jack/Lizzie story.
You write beautifully, and I hope you'll continue.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A perfect ending to an incredible story! ;D
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
only on chapter4 but Im loving it! *I especially loved the CELTIC ring for Lizzie!*

vexesALLmen
person Snowstar
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!! You Updated! Now please do it again.
person Samantha
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey mate, I like this fic... just wanted to let you know that it should be "Tout suite," not "toot sweet." It's French and translates literally to "all continuation."