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by GylzGirl

person jadexms
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, so well written too. Looking forward to more.
person KiwiGirl
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great. Only on chapter one but I am really enjoying this. You have captured Jack. Fantastic..
person Farah
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so realistic that it's AMAZING!!! I hope you continue on... another chpater please!
person annie
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Kepp it up darling! :D
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, can't find a thing wrong with it.
Continue, please. =]
person Shimmeree
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person knit wear
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice one.
person Michelle
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARG!!! God... How much are we all waiting for the next chapter, huh? Your writing is amazing. Very sexy, loving the J/E. Great Jack. Hope you update soon!
I can't believe she'd still a virgin after that bath...
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hothothot! Great job at bringing on the sexy smut. I love you!
person Syra
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. please, please, please, PLEASE. Dear god I think I need a cold shower.