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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story. any chance you could continue?
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your plot and the storyline in general. A breath of fresh air and a humorous idea. Sexy too. Looking forward to more!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll be back to leave a proper review after my long, cold shower ;) perhaps you'll have updated again by the time I return? hahahaha
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Update again?!!?!?! PLease?!!?!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such and great story...I can't wait for the next chapter! The wedding night! *sigh*
Reading this story puts my stomach in knots. In a good way though, trust me! If you're *this* good at writing foreplay,
I can't imagine what your full-on sex scenes will be like! Nor can I wait. >:)
Reading this story puts my stomach in knots. In a good way though, trust me! If you're *this* good at writing foreplay,
I can't imagine what your full-on sex scenes will be like! Nor can I wait. >:)
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love the fic. Please continue soon!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is just utterly amazing. I can't get over how wonderfully you've got Jack's character down. Your writing is wonderful.. And certain things you wrote just made me laugh. Your story is wonderful so far, can't wait until you update!'
..Those last two paragraphs literally made me shiver in anticipation!!
<3
..Those last two paragraphs literally made me shiver in anticipation!!
<3
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Jack + bath = definite yumminess. Please update soon.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*yummy growl* Please update again soon!! :D
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic start, please keep it up, there is a big shortage of Jack/Lizzie fics, wich is a real shame since they have an amazing chemistry on screen.
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