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by GylzGirl

person shatteredmind
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Goodness me, how did I miss this one till now. It's great! I can't wait for more - we have so much to look forward to - a steamy bath scene, Jack all cleaned up and getting married! You're writing is terrific and the story is a lot of fun.
person jadexms
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I love the storyline, and am eagerly awaiting your next installment!

Thanks for writing!
person jessica
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, we're off to a very good start! Yes, yes, Jack is indeed in need of a good scrub-down. ahem.

Update soon!
person Michelle
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my. What a great beginning! Loving the story...hehe, there's going to be a 'marr-i-age'. So hot, so fun. Please update soon! mmmm... washing Captain Jack...
person Christina
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease update?! The story is fantastic!
person Mari
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the concept and the way you wrote it! Sexy :) Hope you continue soon.
person Anguloce
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm i am most definitely intrigued! looking forward to more.
person Flowerlady
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story...I hope you update soon...I'll be looking for it. I love your characterization of Jack..

More soon.


FL
person Firework
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Itching to read more! I really want to see how this goes.
Loving the amount of J/E that has surfaced. Actively enouraging it.
Even more so when it is as well written as this is.
Update soon!
person Julianna
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. In all honesty, I hate the though of Jack and Elizabeth together. Jack needs someone more loose and adventurous, someone more like himself really. And I'll be quite glad if they show no more kissing or anything between them scenes in POTC 3. However, that is the movies. I also don't usually read Jack and Elizabeth fanfictions because I feel it could make me use to seeing things happen between them HOWEVER again, I love this story so far. Jack is very much in character and Elizabeth is too for the most part. I will contiune to read your story ever time you update but I will not become and Jack/Elizabeth fan EVER!! lol but seriously, great story, keep up the good work.


XOX J