rate_review Reviews

Ah, how I love Jack and Elizabeth. It's a good beginning and I can't wait to read more! :D

:gulp: Holy hell! That...was intense. Oh PLEASE update soon! I'm just dying to read about the...umm...bath. Love the dialogue between the two btw. Lizzy's line about holding her breath during sex was hysterical as was Jack's comparision between her and rum. You truly have a talent for keeping these two in character and I can't wait to see where this story goes!

oooh ooh oooh!!!!! more please!!!! there hasn't been any smut yet, and already the anticipation is killin me ;p