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by GylzGirl

person Madamx
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I gotta admit, when there's no new J/E fics on here, I always re-read this one. It's my absolute favorite of all that I've read, anywhere. You are such a good storyteller! Truly awesome! Please continue this story soon!
person Lindsay
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7, please! Soon??!!
person knit wear
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, that made me really sad. talk about a horrific nightmare. jack's lovely to her, isn't he. well, carry on, it was a good chapter.
person Anguloce
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD that was evil! i seriously thought you'd killed jack! can't wait for more, am loving this.
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! very well wirten if I do say so myself. I like that way you make everyone and I think your doing a great job on Jack and Liz! Well read the next chapter...And all the ones to fallow!
person jessica
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay first off, that nightmare sequence was mean! I mean come on, he shot Jack between the eyes!?
Granted it was only a dream, er, nightmare but I was panicking!

Second...OH.MY.GOD.

Jack singing a lullaby???!!! Can we say drop-dead adorable?! That was the best. I loved every moment of this chapter
and I am on pins and needles for the next one. I'd like to see Lizzie in some good ol' fashion pirating and pillaging.
After all she is the wife of a pirate Captain. It's what she signed up for, eh?
person annie
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still perfect.. :)
person Lady Kaceemort
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved Elizabeth's last line in the chapter: "Yo ho." Ha! Glad you updated so soon. It made my day. lol
person LunarBasket
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter :D <3 please update again soon
person Lady Kaceemort
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter. I really, really love this story, if I haven't already told you. Brilliant skills, you have.

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