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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody my. Fantastic and mind blowing, really. YAY! Smut.... YAY! Naked Jack. YAAAAYYYYY. Happy Birthday!
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the sweetest, most lovely J/E chapters of any story I've read in a long time. I just
loved the dialogue between the two of them. You make it so...so... realistic and believable. I really feel for these characters.
And that love scene? Whew! Jack was so sweet and tender and possesive of Lizzy, just like I'd imagined he would be.
I canNOT wait for the Honeymoon chapter! *fans herself*
loved the dialogue between the two of them. You make it so...so... realistic and believable. I really feel for these characters.
And that love scene? Whew! Jack was so sweet and tender and possesive of Lizzy, just like I'd imagined he would be.
I canNOT wait for the Honeymoon chapter! *fans herself*
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellant chapter...and hot...Your writing is very descriptive, it's easy to visualize what you're describing. Thanks for writing.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't sum up how much I love this story, but I can sum up why I want to see the next chapter in just 2 words 'wedding night'
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I must admit, you're much better a writer than most FF.net when it comes to characterizing people of Jack and Lizzie's time. Do update it soon, I should like to see more of it!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter...
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great, great story. You have a way with words that is simply enchanting. Jack, as you write him, is completely sweet and unusually in character. Fantastic story.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull Fic. Love the way you portrayed the character's personalitys. Please let me know when chapter four is up, thnx.
-Mike
-Mike
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful!! Everyone here is so talented and you're no exception. Just the right mix of emotions too! I laughed so hard at times that I cried (esp the part about Gibbs being an "edible creature"...I'm giggling even as I type this review) hahahahahhahahaha :-D Very well done! Please continue in the same spirit as you started, I'm loving it! :-)))
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I want to know what he scribbled there! Something that will come up soon...secret past?