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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that my reviews make you smile darling!
These last two chapters were awesome! Very suspenseful(sp?). I almost always seem to find myself tensed up while reading through your story. Either from a fighting sequence or ,say, the immense sexual tension or the inner battles the characters are having with themselves. It's all just so great!
I'll keep rabidly checking for that next update!
These last two chapters were awesome! Very suspenseful(sp?). I almost always seem to find myself tensed up while reading through your story. Either from a fighting sequence or ,say, the immense sexual tension or the inner battles the characters are having with themselves. It's all just so great!
I'll keep rabidly checking for that next update!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you can't do that! Ok, so you can. But, still! I'm eagerly awaiting the next couple of chapters!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved what you did with that scene! That kiss near the end had my toes curling. So good! Norrington's interruption made me laugh, though, so timely. No wonder Elizabeth kisses like she does on the deck of the Pearl.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a believer now. vrey nice story.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This chapter is bursting with sexual tension I can't stand it! It goes perfectly with the movie.
*pulls at hair*
They need to shag. And hard. And soon.
Alright, great chapter, great story. Update soon, luv!
*pulls at hair*
They need to shag. And hard. And soon.
Alright, great chapter, great story. Update soon, luv!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. The curiosity scene well-done, can't wait till you tackle the next big J/E mystery - the KISS!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Our Lizzie is coming around!
This line: "Some time soon, then" Was well-placed and marvelous. Nice humorous touches throughout.
This line: "Some time soon, then" Was well-placed and marvelous. Nice humorous touches throughout.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work! I look forward to reading more.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters!!! Woo! Great update. And a jealous Lizzie, how fun. Can't wait to see how things progress.
She just needs Jack to give 'er a good ol' shag!
She just needs Jack to give 'er a good ol' shag!
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, very interesting.