I read the story in every free minute I had over the last week. It's such an amazing novel! I couldn't stop reading. You also didn't leave any questions unanswered and I love how you you wrote Sarah and Jareth. I liked how Sarah could be reasonable too and wasn't just a brat all the time. I have to point out that I loved your OC Kayla too a lot!! She is really a cool girl I would like to have a drink/chat with! Very well done! The right amount of smut / romance. Just what I needed in my fanfiction. Also the rollercoaster you put us through towards the end was amazing!! Like YEEEEESSS OMG YES!! .. wait what .. NO .. NOOOO NOOOOO !!! STOP!!! Yes? Maybe? Yess ... Yess .. YEEEESSS! :D Thank you for such an amazing story. Are you active on Tumblr / Instagram / Twitter?? Please let me know. xoxo from Austria
You did a very good job on thus story. It is NY favorite one on the Labyrinth. Thank you for a very good couple days enjoying the story.
What a ride, what a rush, I laughed, I cried, i winced, absolutely fantastic
Kristen x
Wonderful. And a fabulous happy ending. Thank you so much for a great deal of enjoyment.
I LOVED this story. It is so hard to find quality writing when it comes to fanfiction. But this was absolutely superb. Funny, romantic, the love scenes were hot. Excellent work!
very nicely done i really enjoyed the story
im in love! that storry was down right amazing. it is the perfict fit to the movie. as a matter of fact i wish this was a movie.the person who wrote the labyrinth should read this and buy it. i can tell you if i had the chance i would probly watch it as much if not more than i watch the labyrinth and i wath that movie about once a month lol
I think you could give ol' Shakespeare himself a run for his money with this story! I laughed; I cried. I was wanted to throtle the characters at diferent times! I felt I was IN the story! (My name being Sarah doesn't help that, though! LOL) It was BEAUTIFUL! Wow! I truely hope you will continue to write many more stories!
Please write a sequel! This one was just so fantastic.... the best one I've ever read, and nothing can top it. Seriously. You're a gifted writer, please keep on writing!
I'd like to begin with saying that this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and deffinately the best Labyrinth fic I've read. You've hit the characters of Jareth and Sarah right on the head - there was no point where I felt you'd made them OOC or I couldn't believe that it was them - and that's very rare in these fanfics. Everyone seems to make Sarah too whiney, or Jareth too nice, but you've got them. It's fantastic.
Now my only critique is that, on the occasion, I did feel that your descriptions went on just a little too long. It didn't happen often, just once or twice, but there was the odd moment where I did think 'Please hurry up? I want the story!'. You pulled the long plot-line off fantastically though, keep up the good work!
