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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah! This is an amazing story. Your characters are so real and alive. It's the greatest Labyrinth fic I have read in a long time. Please update soon! :)
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVE this story! It's such a pleasure to read, you write so beautifully. The plot is great and the smut (meh, for lack of a better word) is equally as well written. Jareth and Sarahs's characters are extremely believeable as is the tension thats built up between them.
Keep up the brilliant work, i hope you update soon. =]
Keep up the brilliant work, i hope you update soon. =]
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to update this story soon! You have a talent for really good descriptions and keeping both characters...well, in character (as far as we know since there was very little to go on). I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment and hope it comes soon!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please keep going i love it so much.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and have been reading it fanatically ever since I found it. I believe that this is the first time I have reviewed it and I would like to say that I am quite smitten with it.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Labyrinth stories I've ever read. The way you write the characters is very convincing and accurate. I really enjoy the plot and think you are a trully talented writer.
Hope you are able to update soon.
Hope you are able to update soon.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god i love your story so much i cant wait to see what happens next its so funny and thrilling.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please keep going with it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally in my opinion you gathered what was between the lines in the film and you made do with all the hints that came through..
I have to say this is one of the few fan fictions that I would deem memorable, special, and above all charming.
Now its time for construstive critisim.. (we all despise it yet we all need it to grow. It's like fertilizer to a rose... smells aweful but helps the flower grow healthy and strong.)
Should you ask me... I would say Sarah was a bit beyond the swearing and the language I would have thought her to say these things for added effect and not as a daily basis sort of thing... But now that youve started it would be out of place to change that. Jareth is impecably perfect I havent a single word to discribe how well you project him.
Keep the literature flowing as naturally as it has, you have enthralled me... Besides.. Would you want to keep a Queen such as myself waiting?
I have to say this is one of the few fan fictions that I would deem memorable, special, and above all charming.
Now its time for construstive critisim.. (we all despise it yet we all need it to grow. It's like fertilizer to a rose... smells aweful but helps the flower grow healthy and strong.)
Should you ask me... I would say Sarah was a bit beyond the swearing and the language I would have thought her to say these things for added effect and not as a daily basis sort of thing... But now that youve started it would be out of place to change that. Jareth is impecably perfect I havent a single word to discribe how well you project him.
Keep the literature flowing as naturally as it has, you have enthralled me... Besides.. Would you want to keep a Queen such as myself waiting?
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DONT LEAVE US LONG WITH THAT CLIFF HANGER!!!! ITS NOT FAIR!