rate_review Reviews

this story is intelligent and well written. subjection is not necessarily a bad thing, and he seems to require a sort of relative subjection, as her temporary monarch. if only they both could eliminate the denial. the interaction is interesting; she seems to have developed a bit of a rough vocabulary. i am eager to see what you have in store for them in the future.
thank you,
ginny

Yay! I'm glad to see you're reposting this story. I had actually saved it on my computer ages ago when it was posted on Fanfiction.net and had reread it the other day, and realized it hadn't ever been finished. So I hope to see the ending soon. Your story is completely awesome. I can't wait to see more!!!!

Jester! Yay!

I am so excited to see your story on AFF.net. You're labyrinth fics are the reason I started reading fanfiction in the first place! Heck, they're the reason I started writing them!

I've been following "Prized Possesion" on your website since you started it. I love this story....I can't wait for you to continue the postings here.

Will you be putting "Fair Price" and/or "Autumn" on AFF too?

"Sarah frantically rose onto her knees, sitting back on her heels as her eyes trailed slowly and reluctantly up his imposing frame. The black leather boots went to his knees. Upward her eyes drifted, over dark gray breeches that left little to the imagination. Her gaze darted higher still, over a mahogany leather waistcoat, cinched low, exposing a pristine white poet's shirt. His shirt was slightly open at the throat, revealing the amulet that hung in place against his alabaster chest."

Dont we all wish to be in THAT TANTALIZING POSITION? =Fans herself and faints=

Great start to your story. Love the flow of words. Please edit some sentences which have Os separating them.
Please put paragraphs closer together.

"Now, letÕs discuss how you can get your friend back.Ó"

Oh, Jareth...is he helping you to write this?

=Fans herself and faints.=

"Fine...just tell me, what must I do?"

Jareth pursed his lips as he absently tapped his crop against his thigh and began, "The way I see it is...Your friend belongs to me. You want her released. If I am to release what's rightfully mine, I must be offered something in return."

SEXUAL HARASSMENT!!!

=Ogles Jareth's delectable tushy, reaches out to grab it=

What? His ass means a lot to me. :P

She must agree to shack up, or play house, with him...for a year?

Okay...

in human years, that sounds short.

But he is a fae. Fae live forever.

In fae years, a year could mean a century?

Then again...

=Imagines Jareth, nude, tied to the wall. She, dressed in an SM costume, approaches him with a whip=

Hehe...hehe...

Please correctly spell words such as "impris(i)onment."

"He slowly lowered himself onto his throne and drawled, "Come here."

O_O!!!

@_@!!!

He's...so...bloody...hot...!!!

=Fans herself and faints=

There are some words which are stuck together. Please pry them apart.

Have u seen the movie, Secretary?

Cus its just as dark and kinky as this story.