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for Prized Possession

by Maven

person BRP
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats it? NOOOOO!!! More, more, please!!!

Some parts were funny. =LOL=

person kookookitty
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really intreiging story... i found your character explainations/personality descriptions to be very insightful. i am in anticipation of your next update, so many questions to be answered...

thank you,
ginny
person Naria
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
V. intriguing!! I Like it a lot!! I mean, you're continuing the story in a very porbable way along with the whole "Jareth's an asshole" theme still well intact!! ^_^ Sarah would SO not just out of the blue decide she's freakishly attracted to the smexy man, let alone suddenly love him! I HATE stories that do that...GRR!! This is Jareth's wonderful slow seduction via slave treatment! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! I want MOAR!! MOOOOAAARRR!!! pLEASE?! PLEASE?!
person Maria
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story I love it. Keep writing. I would love to read more.