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for Prized Possession

by Maven

person Catrista
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm.. blown away. Completely. Not only is Labyrinth my favorite movie ( and the sad part about -that- is that the first time I saw it was only a year ago! ) but Jareth is my favorite.. deliciously wicked "bad" guy. I'd watched the movie again and again but felt sad afterward that that was it, there would be no more. Left to my imagination ( a delightfully naughty place, I assure you ) I was able to come up with all sorts of scenerios.. but they lacked.. something. Your story has brought Jereth to life again for me, and has sparked my creative side. I'm having what my friends call a Jereth episode, in which I will write and write and write for about three weeks to a month just about Jereth and Sarah until I purge the Jereth demon and am able to regain what little sanity I possess. Thank you, thank you, a thousand times thank you! Pretty please don't hesitate to contact me - I have a feeling you'd be interesting to talk to.

Happy writing!

- Rhiz
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Need a Eulogy! Please? Why'd ya leave me at a end like that?
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it so much I couldnt stop reading and didnt write my psyc. essay because of it.
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you... I'm crying. And I don't cry. I was thrilled to find your story some weeks back, delighted that I would have 40+ chapters of such brilliantly perfect storytelling, but as I drew closer to the end, I became nervous, not wanting to finish. I, like Jareth in this last chapter, tried to take things slow, but, like Sarah, was desperate to have what my heart truly desired. I honestly can't thank you enough, and I hope that you hear me when I say you have given me a beautiful world and a breathtaking man to spend my evenings with, when my other world seems so sad and magicless. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! Okay, so I should tell you that I've NEVER seen Labrinyth and I don't think I've ever heard of it. I don't really watch a lot of movies so please don't be offended. But I came across your story by complete coincidence! I loved it! You did such a great job with the characters making them very descriptive and they were really dynamic. As someone who has never seen this movie, it was very easy for me to follow along!
Congrats on writing such a great story!

~Sonya
person jenny
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooo. jester please make a sequal if this is the end. it can't stop their there needs to be more of them getting along.:"( please!!!!:'( *cries* i love your story
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A fitting ending for an incredible story. Hope to see more from you.

schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM

That....was positively lovely. I mean lovely in the way of a spring breeze or a half dozen sprinkled donuts. It was a masterpiece and an epic that Im sure marks what should have been the true ending. You are a true writer, one that should keep pen to page for the rest of her life.

R
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop!!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally tantalizing. Can't wait to find out how it ends. Haven't read a fanfiction this good in awhile.