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for Prized Possession

by Maven

person Jennifer
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love this story! and I love it that she kicks butt!
person SLQ
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think this is a wonderful story. Please continue soon! Badass Sarah is fabulous and no girl goes to college without knowing a little on how to defend herself. Please continue soon! I read your whole story start to finish and I can't wait to see how it ends! Please let me know when you've updated? I included my email address. THANKS for this wonderful story!
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet!
person Tawni
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are a lot of Labyrinth stories out there, but I have to say, yours outshines all the ones I've read. I do hope you continue this story! You've left me hanging by a thread here! I'm desperate to know what happenes next! Please, keep up the good work and update soon! ^___^
person Rose Atlee
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have tried several times to review as I've been reading this over the last few weeks. This story is absolutely incredible! I love your writing style, the plot, the way you've portrayed Sarah and Jareth - everything. I can't remember how many times I've burst out laughing at certain scenes, only to look up and find my fiance staring at me with a mix of surprise and apprehension.

There are not enough words for this, not enough words at all. Keep up the EXCELLENT work, and I can't wait to find out how it all ends!!
person Katie
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACH! Update! Please. Man I'm dying here. I'm loving Sarah's new attitude. I want to see how she and Nyx battle it out!
person smcandy
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad though it took me a while to remember you updated not very long ago on this but none the less it was good chapter.

Especially Sarah being the hero instead of Jareth lol (^^) anyway you did awesome once again cannot wait for chapter 40 please post it ASAP.

~sm-candy~
person chasa
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHH!!!! If it's at all humanly possible, please update! This has been my favorite Laby story for so long now, where I found it on jestersworld.net, that I just now found it here.....aaahhhh!!!!! I love your imagination and attention to detail. You don't get too caught up in the moment so that your action sequences become unintelligible...

Just......gaahhh!! I just love this story! Ciao! ~ chasa
person Luna
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You rock.

I have only recently become aquainted with the movie Labyrinth...actually it was last friday...anyways, I just wanted to say that you have a wonderful story. I actually have never written a review for anyone, but I felt compelled to tell you how much I like your story. You have a wonderful writing style; it flows very nicely and the characters seem realistic. I can't wait to see what you have coming.

Oh, and badass Sarah rocks, too.
person greer
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM

So good, please write more! Although I know it is the holidays and that can be rather difficult. Still, I love your story a lot!!