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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear abraxis;
i have just finished reading your story "motherload" and i wanted to tell you that i absolutely loved it! i am a huge vin diesel fan as well as a collector of his movies, i can actually see this as a continuation of the chronicles. i think you captured the essence of riddick so well in this story it is almost scary. your original characters are also extreamly well developed, and the plot line is as wonderful as a rollercoster. the changes in the point of view are timed incredibly well also.
sincerly yours
elizabeth
i have just finished reading your story "motherload" and i wanted to tell you that i absolutely loved it! i am a huge vin diesel fan as well as a collector of his movies, i can actually see this as a continuation of the chronicles. i think you captured the essence of riddick so well in this story it is almost scary. your original characters are also extreamly well developed, and the plot line is as wonderful as a rollercoster. the changes in the point of view are timed incredibly well also.
sincerly yours
elizabeth
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Complex and intricate, this complex story held my attention and left me wanting to read more of your work. You gave the characters life, depth, and subtlety. Although your Snape-like doctor did make me grin on first description.
Overall, I forgot this was FAN fic and just read it like a novel.
Not an average response for me.
Thank you, and do post more somewhere?
Overall, I forgot this was FAN fic and just read it like a novel.
Not an average response for me.
Thank you, and do post more somewhere?
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story - i have done nothing all day as i couldnt stop reading your story, this is probly one of the best riddick stories i have read, and even better was that it was all done in one go, no 1 to 2week delays between chapters, lol i cnt get over how good this story was (mmmmm riddick) and im sooo jealous of Jenna who is a wicked heroine. Excellent excellent work!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story! Riddick has always been one of my favorite characters of all time. Awesome story set in that universe. I can tell lots of time went into making this something very book worthy. I look forward to further writings from you in the future!