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More, please!!!

I've been waiting for a young Jack Sparrow fic - so delighted with this!

So...wait...what???? There was no girl? Or, wait, never mind, there WAS a girl, but Jack was dreaming. I didn't read the author's note. I'm dumb. Anyway, what the heck?! You can't stop there!!! Can you?? No, no you can't! So, yeah, like they said, more please! And soon!! School doesn't start for a few more weeks. *pounds fists* I, need, en-ter-tain-ment! Please provide me with it.

I think your description of Lela is wonderful. I love the details you put into her. The relationship between her and Jack is beautiful. I love how they are so buddy-buddy and the sexual tension was an added bonus. To be perfectly honest this is the first "young" Jack Sparrow fic I've read and I quite like it. I think it's cute how you describe Jack's feelings as he discovers love/lust for the first time. I think my favourite line so far has to be, "yup. He loved her all right."