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for Decked

by EvilE

person siriuss3
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what can i say.. huzzah to you, you are so DARN good. i really enjoyed it. i was blushing NON-STOP!! grrrr.. hot!! the thing is i want more.. is this your only fic? anymore ?? i salute.. i am going to dream of jack and james... tonite,

Oh yes!!!.. absolutely,.. definitely. i want to dream your story. (drooling right now)

person Anon
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. That was excellent! You kept Jack and James in character, and I salute you for it.
I can't wait to read the second part to this. <3
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! They make a great (coerced) couple, don't they? You pulled the scenario off brilliantly... not to mention it was totally hot! Great job.
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a lovely little story. :D The only problem I had was the use of "Norry"... ugh. It just kept taking away from an otherwise excellent story. Ended up copying & pasting, and doing a search and replace. Will definitely read the second one.
person ginnygirl
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was some fine work!
person Tempest
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the most in-character fics I've read on here. I was REALLY surprised by how spot-on the dialogue between these two were. I could actually HEAR Jack, quite clearly, in your writing. VERY impressed, since it's a hard thing to manage in PotC fics.

I'm not a particular fan of this ship, but I enjoyed this fic a lot, regardless. Good job.
person Julissis
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Norry should have helped him in return. *grin*
Hot story. ^^ Hope Jack get's in trouble soon.. XD
person Imachar
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written.....both of these characters have really distinctive voices and you write them both perfectly....of course it's also nice to find a story where Norringotn has the upper hand (as it were). Any chance of a sequel? You did leave such a lovely opening for one at the end there.
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Is this going to be a one-shot or will you write more? I seriously hope so, since this could be the beginning of a great story.
Jack struggling with himself, I think I've never read it in such a context before (meaning lust not love).
So in case that you won't continue it: It's a hot, inventive PWP that I immensely enjoyed.
Thanks, darkangel985
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more!