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for Twist

by BarbWireBarbie

schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far i like the way it's going, i just wish you'd continue it. If not for you, then me :P
person johnny luvr
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems really good so far. Keep going!!
person MoonStar4eva
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Good. Go on.
person jen
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I like it, combining good old-fashtioned het (or promise of) while still retaining a bit of the dark, crazy Mort. Looking forward to more (very much!).
person Kameya
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww no i hate cliff hangers!!! you must write more!!! i like how they both have the voices inside thier heads its leading on to something for sure!
person Sneak/ can't be arsed to log in
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Ending it here cuz i want too :P REVIEW!!!!!! OR NO SEX FOR YOU!!!"

Damn yooouuu!!!

Hehe.

Great so far - loving your main character.
-puppy eyes- write more?

Sneak x
person CC
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness with a Twist!! LOL you have to update!
person Crimson
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. The way they both have inner voices it awsome! I wonder how this is going to play out. I also wonder about Alex's past. I mean she took care of her mother, but what did that do to her. And did she take that box? Please update soon!
person Personwithanopinion
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i thought it was good and defitnitly think you should make another chapter
person Steph
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it :) please continue a.s.a.p xXxXx