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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic....loved the intensity of this story. Jack was breath-taking. Now I have to read all your other works.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is just beautiful. It's like a legend or fairy tale in itself. I love the whole premise and what Elizabeth tells him at the end. So great!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a gorgeous story. Your writing is both intelligent and intensely sensuous. You know who Jack is in all his delicious contradictions; he hasn't forgotten his real friendship with Will (unlike in a certain sequel I might mention) but he is still caught up in the delicious opportunities of the moment. He is both giving and a pirate at the same time. And might I add I was utterly breathless. Bravo.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear me... darlin I think you have a new slave, er CONVERT to your writing... ME! This was so deliciously drawn out I was about to explode about 4 times before they did! I loved the role play, that was quite possibly the hottest part of it, I know Cap'n Sparrow enjoys a good role-play ;)
Ever so nicely done, I shall try to read the others ASAP
Ever so nicely done, I shall try to read the others ASAP
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it! You always seem to put Jack into character and he's not an easy one to write. You're so very talented! Please write more stories like this!! We CRAVE more stories like this!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I wish Jack would tell me a story like that!
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me likey me likey!!! really hot and well done, and there wasn't even any real penetration. egads, please write more!
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wha- what the hell, that was the most arousing thing I've ever read. a regular sexual masterpiece. You deserve a medal for writing that, from all the sparrington fans you've just made very 'happy'.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was not only one of the hottest POTC fics I've read, but you managed to keep them both in character! Very clever dialogue, and I loved how you worked the Oddysey/POTC parallel. Well done!