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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY enjoyable!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME I LOVE IT
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God that was hot... So well done. I'm all a'flutter! I love the story-telling idea. And the drinking of rum from her hands! Inspired. Please keep up the great work!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 <3 <3 I looooved that story!!! It was soo good! It was perfect!! It kept you hanging, and I just wanted to keep reading and reading and reading... very very seductive!!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oki, sorry, not sure what happened with my last comment. Anywho, to recap what I said before in case you can't see it, I was just saying that it was a very wonderful story and that I adore the way you write. It was just....wow. To agree with the others. it really left me hanging!!!! I just wanted to keep reading and reading and reading....
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Wow...just wow. I don't have the words to describe how much I loved this story. It was so original and the heat between the two of them just leapt off the page. This is truly an amazing story!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and well-written.
I liked the call back to your other fic with the "giant snake" comment.
'“The sailor... he looks awful, he's down on his luck, lost all his possessions, shipwrecked and at the mercy of the princess... but you know... underneath of that, he's not a nobody or a vagrant wastrel at all. He's a king... the finest king his people have ever known.”'
And that was just...wow. I'm so happy and amazed right now. Very nice.
I liked the call back to your other fic with the "giant snake" comment.
'“The sailor... he looks awful, he's down on his luck, lost all his possessions, shipwrecked and at the mercy of the princess... but you know... underneath of that, he's not a nobody or a vagrant wastrel at all. He's a king... the finest king his people have ever known.”'
And that was just...wow. I'm so happy and amazed right now. Very nice.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I've been haunting LiveJournal for a couple days now, waiting anxiously for every bit of "Ship In A Bottle." Shrieked (scaring husband and dog) at the comments after Chapter 29, when LadyPirate commented she'd taken a short detour with something else. No Chapter 30 yet (been checkin' all day!), so I drifted over to adultfanfiction.net, saw there was another J/E, and opened it. Read every word of "Sparrow's Odyssey," loved it so much I immediately re-read every word, and only then saw who wrote it. I would've known, if I hadn't been so wrapped up in the story itself ;).
Thank you, thank you, thank you. What a writer. I dunno what else to say. What a writer. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)
Thank you, thank you, thank you. What a writer. I dunno what else to say. What a writer. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic, I liked it a lot more than I thought I would. The storytelling was a wonderful plot device, and Jack's so hot, I was totally seduced too. The last couple of lines were absolutely perfect; great job.