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for Tangled Threads - A Story of Pirates

by KiwiGirl

schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a beautiful, beautiful chapter this is! Finally they are together like they should be... well not quite but I'm sure that will come too!
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the little detail of the compass going mad...

This chapter is beautifully done, the distraction of both Will and Bella during dinner, the building anticipation and then finally they are together. Just perfect.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I have fallen in love with Will, seriously. How can a man be so... utterly wonderful?*sigh* Loved them getting one over that Martinez!
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was holding my breath all throughout this chapter, what a change of pace from the one before! And what a huge relief that Jack finally made it!
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jack a 'traditional brother' - decidedly not!

Loved the ending, exactly right and as it should be. You did a fabulous job with this story, thank you for writing and sharing it!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The reunion of Will and Bella was lovely. Just lovely.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Bella, my heart breaks for her. Not exactly the nicest way to discover that you love someone, thinking that you have lost them forever.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Will needs a hug!
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So - Will and Bella are safe, or so it would seem. Though what safe means to one person might not look like that at all to another...
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a magnificent image, the Pearl leading the English Fleet! LOL

I'm glad that Jack has finally caught up, though it would seem he is just a tad late...