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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a relief to find that Will and Bella have a possible ally in Jones... this Carlos guy sounds decidedly nasty! I wonder what it is that he's really after?
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, lovely chapter! Too bad Will has to be so honourable... I have all confidence in Bella making him see sense though!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to see you've updated! A great few chapters, loved the bit with Norrington "rather careless of you Sparrow", could just hear him say that. Am also loving how things are progressing with Will and Bella...
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Horay for updates. Love this story its so exciting always leaves me on the edge of my seat.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The further this story gets, the more I'm falling in love with Will. Would have loved hearing him swear in Spanish...
It's not like Jack to be taken by surprise - can't wait to see how things develop from here. Bella is lucky to have Will with her; that apology may have been very timely indeed!
It's not like Jack to be taken by surprise - can't wait to see how things develop from here. Bella is lucky to have Will with her; that apology may have been very timely indeed!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I believe some of those threads are slowly starting to untangle...
Great chapter, loved all the little details that gave me such a clear picture of that dismal ship that Bella and Will are imprisoned on - wouldn't want to be left at the mercy of that crew! I think Bella will yet be very happy to have Will there with her...
Great chapter, loved all the little details that gave me such a clear picture of that dismal ship that Bella and Will are imprisoned on - wouldn't want to be left at the mercy of that crew! I think Bella will yet be very happy to have Will there with her...
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Jack had rather enjoyed shutting the lid on his swearing sister"
Oh what a brilliant picture that is!
Bella, to be shut away in a convent? I'd like to see that...
Oh what a brilliant picture that is!
Bella, to be shut away in a convent? I'd like to see that...
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I sense a little spark there between Bella and Will. Interesting, very interesting...
Had to laugh at the scene with Will and Selena, poor boy must have been terrified he wouldn't be able to escape from her clutches!
Had to laugh at the scene with Will and Selena, poor boy must have been terrified he wouldn't be able to escape from her clutches!
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehee... Selena's bedroom - could just see how Will's things would clash with her beautiful antiques. Might he be starting to wear out his welcome?
Great scene with Jack and Bella, very real. Such a tender moment with her sitting on his lap at the end...
Great scene with Jack and Bella, very real. Such a tender moment with her sitting on his lap at the end...
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the disguise you had Bella in, I bet she couldn't have imagined anything much worse than that!
Time of reckoning huh - can't wait to hear what Jack is going to say to her...
Time of reckoning huh - can't wait to hear what Jack is going to say to her...