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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good first chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. But it will have to wait.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your Will, he seems to have come into his own and has perhaps learned a thing or two from Jack...
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the strength of the women in this story, wouldn't have been easy times to live in. Poor Bella, so desperate to find out about her past and no one's talking...
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the tension in this one, can't wait to find out what this brilliant or mad plan is!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an awsome story when you have more e mail me
hurry with the next chapters keep up the good work!
hurry with the next chapters keep up the good work!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find this intriguing! It's very much original, I haven't come across anything like it.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realise there was another chapter here... Beautiful description of the ship and the sea at night, almost makes even me want to go on a sea voyage and I am not overly fond of that mode of transport at all. Love Bella, how determined and fierce she is. Glad to see she can look after herself!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - Poor Bella, I could feel her loneliness and fear. I hope she won't do anything rash...
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 - The first part with Will at Selena's - sigh... I think Bella will prove more than a match for Jack and will give him a few grey hairs before this story is done! Loved the way you described Jack, you really have him down pat.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - I wonder where this map of Jack's leads and I can't wait to find our more about Bella's mysterious past. She's an interesting character and I can already see she's going to play a big part in things to come - perhaps in Will's life too?