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love all these tangled webs and suggestions and promises, and especially Will as something more. Keep it coming honey!

"Men groaned in despair when the Pearl docked and the women sighed in anticipation."

I can just see the havoc the pair of them would cause! : D I like the way you describe Jack, some people dismiss him too easily. Am intrigued about Bella, where does she fit in and what is this map Jack is looking for? And will there be more of Will? Lots of questions and interesting characters and Tortuga - what a mix!

A great start, looking forward to more!

Intersting..I like it tho. I'll check back when ya post more!