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for Christmas Eve

by LeoRessa

person ametomoe
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, that's trippy! i liked how you stuck to the narration style, and even conveyed the same sarcasm. good job!
person RikuDrak
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest with you. While this was well written with few typos, spelling, and grammar mistakes, I feel the content was extremely lacking. As in, this was quite OOC. What in the world would cause a nihilist to have a fetish for a commercialized holiday?

Also narrator =/= Jack.