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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you must NOT wait so long in between updates this time! Don't leave us hanging! Your story is too good.
Your sex scenes are absolutely mah-velous dahling! You simply must write more! I love how you make
Jack agressive and talk dirty! phew! *fans herself* Those were some hot chapters!
Can't wait to see what happens now that Will is back! Now, I must go back and reread this story. >:)
Your sex scenes are absolutely mah-velous dahling! You simply must write more! I love how you make
Jack agressive and talk dirty! phew! *fans herself* Those were some hot chapters!
Can't wait to see what happens now that Will is back! Now, I must go back and reread this story. >:)
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
four words... oh my fucking god!!!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was far better than the fanfiction.net version! Thank you.
By the way, it's "tongue", not "tounge". ;)
By the way, it's "tongue", not "tounge". ;)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to leave a review on the one on ffnet. Very good chapter, Elizabeth and Jack are sooo cute together and all the action...I'm fanning myself at the moment, but those are the fun ones. heh. ^.^
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Holy damn!" is right! Crap, they broke the bed?!?! HAH! I laughed when I read that, I could just picture the bed sliding from one side of the cabin to the next as the Pearl sways in the ocean with Lizzie screamin' the whole way.
I absolutely love this chapter, it was so good. More! More!
I absolutely love this chapter, it was so good. More! More!
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more? please! so hot.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.0 I'm glad I found you here, I liked the part here that wasn't on the other!!!! ^.^
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is brillant!! I love it! You must update ASAP!!!!
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