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for The Curse of Eve

by EvilE

person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...nicely done! You did an excellent job of keeping Jack and Elizabeth in character! Loved it, very believable! Nice work :)

JackSparrowsWench
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww how heartbreaking and sweet. Poor weak Jack. Desperatly wonderful. I like how you've made Elizabeth more standoffish at the beginning. Well, I just liked the whole thing. :-)
person jj
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. absolutely beautiful. love the allegory. nice!
person KiwiGirl
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just brilliant. I was laughing out loud several times but then crying for Jack at the end. He is so complicated, so intense. So full of life and everything that is just Jack.
person nuit
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh....I am crying for jack. what a brilliant mix of emotion and expression. He knows what it means. Loved him with the cloth. thank you.
person Gslinger
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Positively Groovy! I have read a lot Capt'n J Sparrow Stories. Most are just routine, yours are not! Love your style and skill with words Babe!

Hope you do this for money....I'd read your stuff any time. Love, G

PS Thanks for the review, Sugar Butt, usually I don't get many
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...wonderful! How I love your Elizabeth/Jack tales!
person Elizabeth
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! such a short yet sweet ending... such romance.. A definately good tail that needed telling.
person junkpuppet
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! :) You are a great writer.. you really have the characters down to a T. Thanks for the story. I enjoyed.