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Tia, I liked the way she talked but no.. definately not for Jack. I guess Jack doesn't really need somebody.. not in the movie world but in the fan fic world, yes. That girl is Olivia. haha. Thanks for the review.. but I wonder, are you the only one reading this? Come on people! 162 hits? REVIEW!

Another great chapter! Poor Olivia :-( In the long run, Jack better make it up to her with some mind blowing sex!! lmao and a good ass apology of course lol. Please update soon!!!!

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Sorry me again. lol Didn't notice you posted a reply to my review in the review thingie lol. I HATED that kiss between Jack and Elizabeth. I have a feeling that nothing will really happen between them in the last movie though. We all know Elizabeth is still the kind of girl who wants to be married (Whether to Will or not) and would like to settle down and have children. Jack likes his freedom and even if he thinks Elizabeth is goodlooking he surely wouldn't give up his freedom for her. I wouldn't lol. Jack needs someone who is close in personality to himself. Not Elizabeth.

UPDATE SOON!!!! lol

Xox

Thanks :) I'm going to try and write another update before I go to sleep tonight. The Jack and Elizabeth kiss was hot... no lying there but I actually felt bad for Will when he saw them. (....again, sorry with the spoilers to anyone else). Look at all the shit Will's done for Elizabeth and she kisses JACK!? Don't get me wrong I love Jack but he needs to be with someone badass (and hopefully not that crazy voodoo lady!)

Hmm. Looks like I'm the first to review this wonderful story. I like how you've kept Jack in character. Very important. I also like that this Olivia isn't or on her way to being a "Mary-Sue". Well done. I also like your take on Jack's childhood. I've never read it like this before, and quite frankly, I thought it was brillant.

Update soon please.


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Thank you SO much for the wonderful review. I know my work is far from something great but I do enjoy what I do very much. Mary-sue type fics are my downfall, unfortunatly, because usually in a movie (or even real life) I don't like who people end up with (expecially PotC - Jack and !!SPOILER!! Elizabeth? Yeah right) so as a past time I just make up people that would be better for them. :) It's my power! Thanks again for the review, I love them so. I will definately continue to update now.