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for Under the Stars (formerly "To Rest")

by EvilE

person Fallen
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story you have talent. please update soon.
person jadexms
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. That was amazing...you need to know what an incredible writer you are. The dialogue was terrific, you really have Tia's voice down. And the J/E parts, I can't go on enough about them. They make my heart ache, in a really good way. Especially your description of that first kiss (and this meeting ) about Jack pouring into her. Thanks eversomuch for writing.