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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!! I love this fic so much!!! They're so hot! The way you described everything all of the little things that bring them closer, the small hesitant touches and the searching hungry mouths. Incredible job!! Their passion is smoldering like the hottest fire on that mountain. So sexy! Definitely a favorite!!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! This was THE fanfiction I've been looking for since I read/watched Brokeback Mountain. The way you explored their feelings, their actions, their thoughts... It was so very completely perfect!
I just wish you moved on the summer.
I know this fanfiction is named "Summer of love", so it's supposed to talk about the summer, but I truly wanted to see more of it, when they get back together after four years and stuff. You have great writing skills.
I loved the choice of words, it made your fanfiction sexy but it was not some "skanky porn". It was sexy, well written, and very arousing.
Just l-o-v-e-d it.
Sorry for my possible mistakes regarding my writing. I'm not a native speaker and sometimes I get pretty confused when it comes to writing.
Congratulations and keep writing.
I just wish you moved on the summer.
I know this fanfiction is named "Summer of love", so it's supposed to talk about the summer, but I truly wanted to see more of it, when they get back together after four years and stuff. You have great writing skills.
I loved the choice of words, it made your fanfiction sexy but it was not some "skanky porn". It was sexy, well written, and very arousing.
Just l-o-v-e-d it.
Sorry for my possible mistakes regarding my writing. I'm not a native speaker and sometimes I get pretty confused when it comes to writing.
Congratulations and keep writing.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is easily one of THE BEST Brokeback fanfics I have ever read! Such vivid detail - not only to the sex acts, but to the characters and their respective personalities. Great job! :)
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much more than hot (though it is); it's so well written, the characters are really true to the film and it goes really deep into the heart of the love story without deriving from the sexual content. A bloody good job.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could ANYONE read this incrediably HOTT story and not leave a comment!? I have read a ton of Brokeback Mountain fan fiction, and I can tell you this is the most erotic fic I have ever seen. Jack and Ennis are both very in character. And your description of the sex acts,OMG!!!! Are you trying to cause all your readers to experiance death by ORGASM?!! I LOOOVE YOU! Please write more!