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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good! It was dark but very believable! You did a wonderful job of capturing Jack's emotions at being betrayed by Elizabeth and feeling the need to take revenge. Loved it!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
surprisingly good!!! i give it 4 stars!!!
well done not overly abusive but enough to get the point across
Cheers
Sera
well done not overly abusive but enough to get the point across
Cheers
Sera
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A really great story, the only one I've read with Jack being dark. I really liked it. x
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, different to the other fanficts where he forgave her or gave her a choice. Nope, she killed him and had to pay the price. One thing; it left me wanting more. You should write a sequel, i can imagine a really good story coming out of it.
Great work!
Great work!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I read this ages ago and liked it a lot. Very introspective and well done. Thanks for tackling the darker side. Nicely written. Write more?
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
powerful stuff. the fic seemed to begin and stop rather abruptly tho.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought i wouldn't like it, but honestly it was very well done for such a dark fic. it was frightening to see such a side of Jack, but i feel you captured it very well. it would be interesting to see a sequel to this.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That´s great. I like it, because Jack IS a pirate, after all. And I guess, that´s the reason why Liz wants him so badly. She played wih him and betrayed him, and he took revenge. Please continue, this could lead to an interesting story...
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey im sure this was pretty old? i've read this ages ago not sure why it was brought back up again. but well done anyways! where is the author?? please write more angsty stuff j/e! i love it!!! prettyy please!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good writing, and very dark. probably quite a feasible conclusion between the two after she killed jack, if POTC wasn't owned by disney....