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for No one said Sith was easy

by Darkaus

person Anon
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"They stood there, panting and frothing, yapping, gaining members until a virtual wall of teeth and bad breath loomed like a wave waiting to break. "

Not bad! ;D

"Stunned she watched them go, (what is wrong with those people...?)"

Like it!

Sex next time, eh?
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOhh, gooodddd, ggoooooddd..... ;D

person Anon
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh nice cliffie! Liked that! More please! :p
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
reallly good! I was a little confused about whether this was a flashback or a dream. But the writing was great!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice! Keep it up!