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for The Viper's bite

by Malestorm

person AdamIam
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES. MORE!!!!
person Khale
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so going to update THIS!!! I know you are it is extremely Hot and Beautiful. Youa re so awesome!!!
person Softly
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this just begs for an update asap. This is trully AWesome you are amazing if I have not said that before I am saying it now.
person karmaxp
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO weeeeee. I am tingling with thoughts of what the next chapter will bring. You have awesome stories and you are an awesome writer.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As usual exceptional writing. You must updatethis soon. Now that she finally said yes I think you should write it. Loving every word of this.
person Granite
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itis about time. Now on to the hardest part I think writing a love scene but I gots faith in you because you are awesome and don't know it!lol Excellent chapter!
person SafeHaven
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. This Romantic Love story is as pricless as you are Blu!
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so Awesomely delicious! Finally Ky'an and Paula with alone time with Jake'her's blessing sort of speak.

I am so thrillled and hooked

I do not think Se'tra will abide by Jake'her's threat I know she will make herself known again.
You are amazing !!
person Payden
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely !! Lovely!! I love the thought that Ky'an wants to be her one and only.Excellent. Please continue I await the next chapter.
person RedWine
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that they just did not just start going at it in the beginning and she did not give in right away. Paula actually thought about what it would mean to be with Ky'an. She would never leave the ship and she has to be sure he is the one she wants. He has the strength, honor and passion that she always wanted in a man. I think she has made a wise decision... Awesome writing from an Awesome author. Fadeaway Blond